Saturday, August 18, 2007

Wanna be me...

Wanna live my life all over again,
Wanna cherish all those moments,
Wanna do all those crazy things that I did,
Wanna dive down deep and bring out all that I lost,
Wanna make all those things right which never were,
Wanna be the man I never could become or did I?
Wanna see me playing in the sand again,
Wanna hear your bedtime stories Pa,
Wanna rhyme your lullabies too,
Wanna see my brother born again,
Wanna see him smile again,
Wanna find my old jeans,
Wanna see all those dreams,
Wanna go back to school again,
Wanna see me grow up again,
Wanna live my life all over again...

Wanna hide in your bosom Ma, and cry my heart out,
Wanna be the son I never was,
Wanna be everything I ever was,
Wanna be everything I never was,
Wanna know why things happened the way they happened,
Wanna see myself hardened,
Wanna know my metamorphosis,
Wanna know everything inside out,
Wanna know why I laughed,
Wanna know why I cried,
Wanna know why I loved you,
Wanna feel how I loved you,
Wanna feel how it hurt,
Wanna be zipping back in time,
Just to rediscover myself all once again...

Oh to fathom the person I am,
To pack my whole life into a knapsack,
And walk into the horizon,
Never looking back once more,
To be yet with the people I love,
To be always what I wanted to,
Not what I ought to,
To always know what I have and treasure,
To always know that in this world,
There be only two people who love you the most,
Wanna go back into their arms all over again…

To you Mama and Bapa … I Love You.

16 comments:

sonika said...

Incredible work...just toooooo gud...almost got into tears wn i read it...it feels that it has come out right from the heart...

Pragnya said...

hi....
its ver sweet rather all of us..at sm ponit of our life..miss those moments..want to live those moments again..which we missed out due to rush...n u have carved them perfectly
perhaps certain lines direct 4m ur heart..
its gud
keep it up..!!!!

Sanyasa Prabhav Behera$$Hari Om!! said...

Somu, Somu, Somu!!
Its simply Fabulous!! Actually tryin to appreciate it with advectives would make my comments seem artificial, but honestly, it is very very beautiful...Couldn't have been Better...

Kaka, Kaki, Romu and all of us are proud to have a person like u in this mundane world, with us...

Frankly, i had goose-bumps readin it...

Keep writin such beautiful poems and articles,

Love,
Pabloo

Abhisek said...

aaahhh .. what can i say ..
dude ...
i think ... this 1 is d best n simplest form of poems i have read ...

its been real fun 2 read all ur lines dat speak out mine too...

for dat ; thnx a lot ...
m eagerly waiting for another 1 ..
because ,this is d thng dat reflects
my dearest friend Mr DENAA i know...

softest rock on earth ...
bbye

sr.dash said...

nice beginning!

salvwi said...

awesome .... is even too trifle a word to comment on this pragmatic writing of urs..... who so ever reads this .. thru the journey of reading will definitely find an image of his/her life thru ur writing .... quite touchy ... n 'coz its ur heart speaking thru ur writings ... :)

pragyan said...

Very nearly the work of a virtuoso!!! ...A masterpiece of the emotions submerged within us...hats off to you!!keep posting :)

Bibhav said...

Thank You All...

sajad said...

it was nice reading it..

sneha said...

fatastic piece of writing !! :) i loved it ! the simplest version of english i have read in sometime !! ..very moving indeed !

gary said...

hi rockstar....this one was truly out of this world...ur emotions could b felt in it....feels gr8 to read ur feelings being penned by some1 else....

Veechi said...

Hey...
its beautiful...never knew u were such a gud poet...it was a pleasure going thru ur blog...u r a truly gifted person...

sasmita said...

hey... great 1.. awsome infact..u r speakin out evryonez heart.I really hv bcome a fan of urs[:)].. I never knew words cud do this miracle until i read this blog.. keep writing.. if not 4 u for all of us who feel so happy reading dem!!!

subhashree said...

Sense n simplicity throughout.!
the vivid expressions, the right feeling of nostalgia and the yearning to walk back n rediscover things..simply amazing.!

Dezineguru said...

Bibhav..this is a fantastic writing.I appreaciate your skill and would like to see more of these in your blog..your travellogues..and experiences shared will beneficial for the mankind.Wish u all the best in all your endeavours.

jyotsna said...

slow motion sensation...just awesome....
ahh, presentation of simple words in a magical way..
i loved it...
keep it up:)